开头方法一、比较新颖、有创意的开头“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.开头方法二、可以适当的复述一下题目,然后稍作让步,再表达自己的观点和立场“Work greatly influences people's personal lives—their special interests, their leisure activities, even their appearance way from the work place.”The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests, recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined by their work, in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation, the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work, and how central the work is to one's sense of self.“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building's various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.开头方法三、以提问方式开头,阐述自己的观点,再表明自己的立场“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.开头方法四、可以先表明自己的立场,再阐述原因Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.Contrary to the statement's premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.。
我们都知道,一篇较好的托福作文需要字数达到400-450左右,然而我们的规定时间只有短短的30分钟,可想而知,托福写作的字数压力还是比较大的。
所以我们建议,开头段不应该占据太多时间,我们应该多留一些时间给后面主体段的扩展,让文章更加充实。通常开头段的要求是字数在70-100词左右,时间控制在3-5分钟。
不排除有些学生拿到题目就能文思泉涌的敲出一篇开头,但是对于大多数学生来说,紧张的时间再加上紧张的情绪,在开头段就会卡壳。那么针对这大多数的情况,我们有没有什么解决办法呢? 那么接下来我们用一个题目来看看。
Do you agree or disagree: money is the most important aspect in a job? 首先拿到这个题目,我们可以看到要谈论的是钱对于工作的重要性,那么在开头段我们要如何引入话题呢?我们可以这样写: In contemporary society, it has become a hot issue that whether money is the most important aspect in a job。 People's opinions about it vary from person to person。
“在现代社会,钱到底是不是工作中最重要的部分,这个话题引起了大家的热烈讨论,大家的观点各不相同”。很显然,这是个引入主题的好方法。
接下来是正反方观点,也就是一些人同意而另一些人不同意的部分了: A number of supporters of that viewpoint claim that money is very important on account of its necessity to satisfy our daily needs, but other people who are opposite to that view hold that other factors like interest and social liability are also significant aspects in a job。 可以看到,我们在托福写作范文中介绍各方观点的时候可以适当的加上一下你可以想到的简单理由来帮我们填充开头。
最后一部分是个人观点,也就是表达自己看法的时候,大家对于这个应该是非常擅长了,无非就是就我个人来说,我的看法是什么: As for as I am concerned, I am convinced that money is not always the most important。 我们可以看到,背景争议法的开头写法结构和思路都是非常清晰的。
万能凤头 ●青春是用意志的血滴和拼搏的汗水酿成的琼浆——历久弥香;青春是用不凋的希望和不灭的向往编织的彩虹——绚丽辉煌;青春是用永恒的执著和顽强的韧劲筑起的一道铜墙铁壁——固若金汤。
●信念是巍巍大厦的栋梁,没有它,就只是一堆散乱的砖瓦;信念是滔滔大江的河床,没有它,就只有一片泛滥的波浪;信念是熊熊烈火的引星,没有它,就只有一把冰冷的柴把;信念是远洋巨轮的主机,没有它,就只剩下瘫痪的巨架。 ●站在历史的海岸漫溯那一道道历史沟渠:楚大夫沉吟泽畔,九死不悔;魏武帝扬鞭东指,壮心不已;陶渊明悠然南山,饮酒采菊……他们选择了永恒,纵然谄媚诬蔑视听,也不随其流扬其波,这是执著的选择;纵然马革裹尸,魂归狼烟,只是豪壮的选择;纵然一身清苦,终日难饱,也愿怡然自乐,躬耕陇亩,这是高雅的选择。
在一番选择中,帝王将相成其盖世伟业,贤士迁客成其千古文章。 ●只有启程,才会到达理想和目的地,只有拼搏,才会获得辉煌的成功,只有播种,才会有收获。
只有追求,才会品味堂堂正正的人。 ●如果说友谊是一颗常青树,那么,浇灌它的必定是出自心田的清泉;如果说友谊是一朵开不败的鲜花,那么,照耀它的必定是从心中升起的太阳。
多少笑声都是友谊唤起的,多少眼泪都是友谊揩干的。友谊的港湾温情脉脉,友谊的清风灌满征帆。
友谊不是感情的投资,它不需要股息和分红。(友谊可以换其他词语) ●盈盈月光,我掬一杯最清的;落落余辉,我拥一缕最暖的;灼灼红叶,我拾一片最热的;萋萋芳草,我摘一束最灿的;漫漫人生,我要采撷世间最重的———毅力。
●如果说生命是一座庄严的城堡,如果说生命是一株苍茂的大树,如果说生命是一只飞翔的海鸟。那么,信念就是那穹顶的梁柱,就是那深扎的树根,就是那扇动的翅膀。
没有信念,生命的动力便荡然无存;没有信念,生命的美丽便杳然西去。(划线处可以换其他词语) ●毅力,是千里大堤一沙一石的凝聚,一点点地累积,才有前不见头后不见尾的壮丽;毅力,是春蚕吐丝一缕一缕的环绕,一丝丝地坚持,才有破茧而出重见光明的辉煌;毅力,是远航的船的帆,有了帆,船才可以到达成功的彼岸。
●爱心是一片照射在冬日的阳光,使贫病交迫的人感到人间的温暖;爱心是一泓出现在沙漠里的泉水,使濒临绝境的人重新看到生活的希望;爱心是一首飘荡在夜空的歌谣,使孤苦无依的人获得心灵的慰藉。 ●心的本色该是如此。
成,如朗月照花,深潭微澜,不论顺逆,不论成败的超然,是扬鞭策马,登高临远的驿站;败,仍滴水穿石,汇流入海,有穷且益坚,不坠青云的傲岸,有“将相本无主,男儿当自强”的倔强。荣,江山依旧,风采犹然,恰沧海巫山,熟视岁月如流,浮华万千,不屑过眼烟云;辱,胯下韩信,雪底苍松,宛若羽化之仙,知退一步,海阔天空,不肯因噎废食。
●快乐=物质/欲望。这是美国经济学家萨缪尔森提出的快乐方程式。
从经济学的观点看,物质消费越大,欲望越小,快乐就越大,正应了中国人的一句古话“知足常乐”。反之,如果一个人的物质消费有限,而欲望无穷大,将会怎样呢?路瓦栽夫人有那么多“梦想”,又有那么多“陶醉”,她怎么能不痛苦、伤心呢? ●俄国作家契诃夫说:“有大狗,有小狗,小狗不该因为大狗的存在而心慌意乱。
所有的狗都应该叫,就让他各自用上帝给他的声音。 ●成熟是一种明亮而不刺眼的光辉,一种圆润而不腻耳的音响,一种不需要对别人察颜观色的从容,一种终于停止了向周围申诉求告的大气,一种不理会哄闹的微笑,一种洗刷了偏激的淡漠,一种无须声张的厚实, 一种并不陡峭的高度。
●爱,有的时候不需要山盟海誓的承诺,但她一定需要细致入微的关怀与问候;爱,有的时候不需要梁祝化蝶的悲壮,但她一定需要心有灵犀的默契与投合;爱,有的时候不需要雄飞雌从的追随,但她一定需要相濡以沫的支持与理解。 ●微笑着,去唱生活的歌谣,不要埋怨生活给予了太多的磨难,不必抱怨生命中有太多的曲折。
大海如果失去了巨浪的翻滚,就会失去雄浑;沙漠如果失去了飞沙的狂舞,就会失去壮观。人生如果仅去求得两点一线的一帆风顺,生命也就失去了存在的意义。
●即使青春是一枝娇艳的花,但我明白,一枝独放永远不是春天,春天该是万紫千红的世界。 即使青春是一株大地伟岸的树,但我明白,一株独秀永远不是挺拔,成行成排的林木,才是遮风挡沙的绿色长城。
即使青春是一叶大海孤高的帆,但我明白,一叶孤帆很难远航,千帆竞发才是大海的壮观。 ●生命不是一篇"文摘",不接受平淡,只收藏精彩。
她是一个完整的过程,是一个"连载",无论成功还是失败,她都不会在你背后留有空白;生命也不是一次彩排,走得不好还可以从头再来,她绝不给你第二次机会,走过去就无法回头。 ●试试看——不是像企鹅那样静静的站在海边,翘首企盼机会的来临,而是如苍鹰一般不停的翻飞盘旋,执著的寻求。
试试看——不是面对峰回路转、杂草丛生的前途枉自嗟叹,而是披荆斩棘,举步探索。 试试看——不是拘泥于命运的禁锢,听凭命运的摆布,而是奋力敲击其神秘的门扉。
1、表示原因的托福作文万能句子1)There are three reasons for this.2)The reasons for this are as follows.3)The reason for this is obvious.4)The reason for this is not far to seek.5)The reason for this is that。
例如: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.2、表示好处的托福作文万能句子1)It has the following advantages.seadragonedu.com2)It does us a lot of good.3)It benefits us quite a lot.4)It is beneficial to us.5)It is of great benefit to us.例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.3、表示坏处的托福作文万能句子1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.2)It does us much harm.3)It is harmfulto us.例如:However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能的托福作文万能句子1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.2)We think it necessary to do sth.3)It plays an important role in our life.例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.5、表示措施的托福作文万能句子1)We should take some effective measures.2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.例如:The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.。
1.场景或背景信息即题目中出现的phenomenon大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。
因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况:✔ 题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是重写(paraphrase)题目中的背景信息和提出另一些人观点:✔ 主动语态被动语态✔ 主谓宾主系表✔ 某些近义词互换Example:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things that they like to do rather than doing things they should do.Use specific details and example to support your answer.► In contemporary society, whether people nowadays immerse too much of themselves in personal enjoyment has become a heated discussion. Numerous supporters of the viewpoint claim that an increasing amount of time has been put into self entertainment while others assert that most of the citizens prefer doing things that they should do. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。
音符动态简约分割线2.题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现观点但题目中字数较少若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开首方式来保证字数。
✔ 就地点细节化来说明题目中的背景信息。✔ 追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。
Example:✔ 1. 就地点细节化来说明题目中的背景信息。Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific details and example to support your answer.► It is a truth universally acknowledge that school is a place where students equip themselves with all sorts of skills before they step into the society. What they should focus on learning has always been a controversial point. Some hold the opinion that。
while in my personal perspective,其后加入考生个人观点即可。✔ 2. 追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific details and example to support your answer.► From the beginning of 19th century, technology in the world has been developing rapidly, which enables computers players to have easier access to all sorts of digital games. In the last decades, a special phenomenon has been revealed that the proportion of children playing computer games is surging. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。音符动态简约分割线3.题目中仅出现部分人的观点没有背景信息这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。
Example:The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?► In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
第一,托福独立写作开头段—开门见山式
具体结构:概括背景 + 引出话题 + 一类人观点 + 另一类人观点对比 + 个人观点
1、概括背景:以概括题目的方式给出文章的写作背景
2、引出话题:以承上启下的方式引出题目关键词
3、一类人观点:针对题目的两个面(比如说:立场A和立场B),先给出一类人的观点(比如说:立场A)
4、另一类人观点对比:站在一类人的对立面给出相对立的观点(立场B)
5、个人观点:在相对立的两个立场中选择一个作为自己的观点(立场A / 立场B)
第二,托福独立写作开头段—娓娓道来式
具体结构:概括背景 + 引出话题 + 一类人观点 + 另一类人观点对比 + 争议句
1、概括背景:以概括题目的方式提出文章的写作背景
2、引出话题:以承上启下的方式引出题目关键词
3、一类人观点:针对题目的两个面(比如说:立场A和立场B),先给出一类人的观点(比如说:立场A)
4、另一类人观点对比:站在一类人的对立面给出相对立的观点(立场B)
5、争议句:给出一个争议的句子,不直接表明个人观点,将之留在“论证段”或“结尾段”进行阐述或总结
In the first place,
In the second place,
Last but not least,
Finally,
In conclusion,
这些都可以啊。
美国人忌讳模板,因为模板可以用在任何一篇文章上,而想要杜绝这种问题,你就要根据每道题目写出独特的句型来,并且要避免说空话,要有内容,不能给人凑字数的感觉。如果你的作文中能不用take put make这些字的话,你的文章应该就已经写的很好了,没有必要背模板。
如果你的作文能力不行,那就背模板吧,因为你不背还不如背分高。
新托福考试,即基于互联网的托福考试从2005年1月23号落地大陆,独立写作一直都没有要求写标题,所以不用担心标题的问题。
关于开头,有两个问题需要注意:速度。考试是的作文不同于平时自由写作,时间至关重要,而且开头在重要性方面比起中间段落要弱不少(仅限在考试情境下哦,考试情况下时间紧迫,考生不太可能在那么短的时间里写出惊天地泣鬼神的开头。
同时,考官也有这样的预期,会把重心放在看主体段落上面),所以一定要快。托福独立写作开头建议使用时间不超过3分钟。
结构。如果想快速完成开头,除了平时多加练习之外,学会分解任务至关重要。
把开头当做一个大任务,那么分解为三个小任务,每个任务完成了,开头就写完了。建议开头三个任务:a. 背景:题目所要讨论的核心话题是什么?它的重要性是什么?有了他,人们,社会,世界会怎么样?没了呢,又会怎么样?说白了,就是一定意义的“忽悠”。
不过请注意,如果实在觉得写不出来,那就可以不写,这个部分是可以选择写或者不写。b. 引出题干:在背景结束之后,开始将题干引出来。
引出的方法有三个:1)反方观点:自己的态度已经确定的情况下,用反方的立场,把话题引出,伺机反驳,为后面引出自己的观点埋下伏笔。2)双方争议:比较熟悉的方式九十大家知道的,Some people think A;Some people think B. I think A. 不过,建议要写明两方面所持观点的理由,这样会更有说服力。
3)抛出问题:将题干改为一般疑问句或者特殊疑问句。同样,为了会面以回答问题的方法引出个人观点做好准备。
c. 个人观点:个人观点的表述很大程度上依赖题干是如何引出的:1)如果是反方观点引出,我们当然不同意它,可以写: I disagree. I believe…2)如果是双方争议,要做出选择。可以写:As for me, I would support A / B.3)如果是抛出问题,要做出回答。
可以写:The answer is…以下是范例:题目:Do you agree or disagree?Universities should spend more money on improving facilities or hiring good professors.完整例 1(背景+反方观点+个人观点)(背景)The quality of a university matters to it own development and also students' future. There are many critical factors in judging a university and among them, facilities and professors are commonly noticed. (反方观点)Some people would say that the importance of professors outweighs that of facilities, for they are the fundamental competitiveness for any school. (个人观点)I, however, disagree. I believe that better facilities will be more beneficial to us. 完整例 2(背景+双方争议+个人观点)(背景)The quality of a university matters to it own development and also students' future. There are many critical factors in judging a university and among them, facilities and professors are commonly noticed. (双方争议)Nowadays, people have conflicting opinions about whether professors weigh more in the progress of a university than facility. (个人观点)As for me, professors are more essential.完整例 3(背景+抛出问题+个人观点)(背景)The quality of a university matters to it own development and also students' future. There are many critical factors in judging a university and among them, facilities and professors are commonly noticed. (抛出问题)Then, the question is which one affects the progress of a university more? (个人观点)The answer is definitely the professors.。
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