一. 英语作文开头方式
1、“开门见山”式
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回忆性开头
二. 英语作文结尾方式
1、自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
一般来说应该背一点精彩的句式放在开头用以吸引阅卷老师的注意力,
让他对你有一个比较好的第一印象,
在最后结分的时候把你的分数向上靠
(不要小看这一靠,有时候1分就是天壤之别!)
但总体基本以简单句为主,
不要显得太过于注重华丽的词藻,
当然如果你的水平足够随意使用复合句的话就没有这点条条框框,
主要是因为如果你的水平不到家,
容易出现语法或句式的错误更加令阅卷老师讨厌。
楼上的兄弟说的完全不正确!
英语的作文也是和语文一样按评分标准打分的,
不是只要语法对就好,
举一个高考评分标准为例:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次
的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
可能是你用的开头是已经用烂的那种啦,
网上找找很多很好的开头的。
一、用于驳性和比较性论文 1. In general, I don't agree with 2. In my opinion, this point of view doesn't hold water. 3. The chief reason why… is that… 4. There is no true that… 5. It is not true that… 6. It can be easily denied than… 7. We have no reason to believe that… 8. What is more serious is that… 9. But it is pity that… 10. Besides, we should not neglect that… 11. But the problem is not so simple. Therefore… 12. Others may find this to be true, but I believer that… 13. Perhaps I was question why… 14. There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to… 15. Though we are in basic agreement with…,but 16. What seems to be the trouble is… 17. Yet differences will be found, that's why I feel that… 18. It would be reasonable to take the view that …, but it would be foolish to claim that… 19. There is in fact on reason for us so believe that… 20. What these people fail to consider is that… 21. It is one thing to insist that… , it is quite another to show that … 22. Wonderful as A is , however, it has its own disadvantages too. 23. The advantages of B are much greater than A. 24. A's advantage sounds ridiculous when B's advantages are taken into consideration. 二、用于描写图表和数据 1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998. 2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year. 3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995. 4. It would be expected to increase 5 times. 5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year. 6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996. 7. The total number was lowered by 10%. 8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year. 9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent. 10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. 11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with… 三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文 1. Everybody knows that… 2. It can be easily proved that… 3. It is true that… 4. No one can deny that 5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is… 6. The chief reason is that… 7. We must recognize that… 8. There is on doubt that… 9. I am of the opinion that… 10. This can be expressed as follows; 11. To take …for an example… 12. We have reason to believe that 13. Now that we know that… 14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned… 15. The change in …largely results from the fact that 16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally… 17. A number of factors could account for the development in… 18. Perhaps the primary reason is… 19. It is chiefly responsible of… 20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact… 21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that… 22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that… 23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon… 24. Different people observes it in different ways. 四、用于文章的开头 1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question:“…?” 7. More and more people have come to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention. 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently. 五、用于文章的结尾 1. from this point of view… 2. in a word… 3. in conclusion… 4. on account of this we can find that… 5. the result is dependent on… 6. therefore, these findings reveal the following information: 7. thus, this is the reason why we must… 8. to sum up … 9. as far as…be concerned, I believe that… 10. It is obvious that… 11. There is little doubt that… 12. There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful 13. None of the solutions is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way. 14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on… 15. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that… 六、用于论证和说明 1. As it is described that… 2. It has been illustrated that… 3. It provides a good example of… 4. We 。
一、说明原因型模块 Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7). 注释: 1、XX的第一个优点 2、支持XX的做法 3、不支持XX的做法 4、XX的第二个优点 5、举例证明优点二 6、说明XX优点三的影响二、说明原因型模块 In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).三、说明原因型模块 For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7). 注释: 1、人们针对XX的态度和举措 2、归纳现状 3、第一个原因 4、第二个原因 5、第三个原因 6、重申造成现状的最重要原因四、说明原因型模块 These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since(5),it is natural that (6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future. 注释: 1、提出论题 2、说明现状 3、理由一 4、理由二 5、理由三 6、理由三引起的后果 7、解决方法提纲式作文写作模板 1、对立观点式 A. 有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么? B. 有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么? C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式 A.一个错误观点。 B.我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。
An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people's belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式 A.一个社会问题或者现象 B.产生的原因 C.对社会和我们生活的影响 D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话) E.前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……辩论式议论文模版(一) Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。
或From above, we can predict that 预测。 辩论式议论文模版(二) People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1. While others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。
或。
一、开头万能公式
1.开头万能公式一:
名人名言:有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理,而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2.开头万能公式二:
数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文绉绉的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:A recent statistics shows that …
二、结尾万能公式
1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
一)段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。
一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是…… Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重 的问题。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。
很显然……,但是 为什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that ______ while. Obviously, ______, but why?(二)中间段落句1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____.2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。
最糟糕的是……。But I don't think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___.3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要 的是…… ______is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First,______. What's more, _____.Most important of all,______.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。
首先,我们可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。
一方面……,另一方面,Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another, ______6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。
所有这些方法肯定会……。It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。
总的来说,……的主要原 因是由于…… Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.(三)结尾句1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ……2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。
然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)……But ……and……have heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is 。
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