我的英语水平不够高,但是我的建议肯定没问题:
你会汉语写作么?英语的作文我的初中生活其实一样简单:根据你自己掌握的词汇量来构思这篇文章是第一位的。
第二点,在结构上完全可以参照汉语作文的结构,写成几个部分,轻重比例自己掌握好,详略自己控制好。
第三点,根据你的词汇量和语法知识,可以考虑有意识地使用几种学过的语法知识——比如时态变化,还可以有意识地使用一下一些惯用法或词语组合的词组。
第四点,好的开头其实不存在。一篇文章无论中英文,都是和内容有关的。好比百度知道里好听的、个性的昵称不少,但是那些高分的知道高手却未必都有很响亮的昵称。如果你特别想要个好开头,显得不同凡响。那我可以用汉语给你写一个,但是整篇的文章风格都得按照这个来。
开头:真的?我真的是初中生了?当我拿到入学通知书的时候,我有点不敢相信自己的眼睛。因为就在前一天下午,我还参加了小学同学的聚会,玩的都是从小一直在玩儿的游戏呢。
参考译文: Really? I really is already is a junior high school student? When I got the enrollment notice, I daren't even believe my eyes. Because it's just one day before afternoon, I have attended primary school party, play is since the childhood always playing the game.
结尾。不错。我是初中生了。我的初中生活就这么开始了,我想,我的初中生活将会比我的小学生活更有趣,也更有意义。你说呢?
参考译文:Good. i'm a junior high school student. my junior high school life is so, i think my junior high school life will be better than my school life is more interesting and more sense. you say?
水平一般,仅供参考。
我觉得要做一名合格的初三学生,要好好学习,天天向上。思想要健康,做人要有修养。学习的时候要认真,上课要听讲。生活要井然有序,不能拖拖拉拉。体育要好,多运动。卫生要干净。才能成为一名合格的初三学生。
I thought that must be one qualified third day student, must study well, is upward daily. The thought wants the health, the personhood to have the training. Study time must be earnest, attends class must listen. The life must be systematic, cannot haul. The sports is friends with, multi-movements. The health must be clean. Can become one qualified third day student.
Basketball is a popular team sport played worldwide by people of every age. It's a game that involves shooting, passing, and dribbling. The goal of basketball is to try to score points against the other team by propelling a ball through a high hoop. While competitive basketball is primarily an indoor sport, played in a standard basketball court, less regulated variations have become more popular as an outdoor sport played among friends purely for entertainment purposes 篮球是一项集体运动流行全球的发挥每个人的年龄。这是一个游戏,包括射击,传球,运球和。篮球的目标是试图积分对其他队的一个球,通过推进高箍。虽然有竞争力的篮球主要是一项室内运动,打了一个标准的篮球场,较少监管的变化已成为更受欢迎的户外运动发挥朋友之间纯粹是为了娱乐的目的。 I live in a new neighbourhood now. My family moved here a year ago. From then on more and more people became our neighbours. A big supermarket and more than twenty different shops have been set up since last year. An underground nearby is under construction. It seems that our life gets more and more convenient. It is said that many tall buildings around here will be put up. It is reported that a new park in the north of our neighbourhood will be built soon. What a green and nice neighbourhood ours will be! 邻里 我住在一个新的居民区现在。我的家人搬来这里一年前。从那时起,越来越多的人成为我们的邻国。大超市和20多个不同的商店已经设立了去年以来。附近的一个地下正在建设中。看来,我们的生活获得了更多和更方便。有人说,许多高楼大厦在这里将张贴。据报道,一个新的公园北部的我们的邻国将很快建成。什么是绿色和我们的好邻居将!
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Life has been changing me
Having been through these years,I changed a lot. I'm no longer a little child who always cry but a kid with responsblity. Maybe I was once a lazy boy and was always complaining about the world which was unfair to us. But now things are different,I know we should depend on our own to creat, to change the world.
When I was a primary school student, my family and I took a trip to five cities which were in the south of China.
First, we came to Nanjing by plane. That was the first time I had taken the plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. We arrived in Nanjing in the morning. At 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. The food tasted delicious. In the afternoon we went to “Zhongshanling”. It was the place that preserve the tomb of Mr. Sugshan.
The next day, we came to Wuxi and then Suzhou where we visited the region of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. It was a beautiful and old place. The house there were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.
The fourth day, we came to Hangzhou where We visited “The West Lake. It was very beautiful and the water was clear . As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some beautiful silk and famous tea of “龙井”.
The last place that we visited was Shanghai. It was one of the biggest city is China. The night view in Shanghai was more beautiful than Beijing. We visited the TV tower of “东方明珠”. It was the third tallest tower in the world. Standing in the tower you could see the whole city. In the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. I was very excited that evening.
(1) Life has been changing me Having been through these years,I changed a lot. I'm no longer a little child who always cry but a kid with responsblity. Maybe I was once a lazy boy and was always complaining about the world which was unfair to us. But now things are different,I know we should depend on our own to creat, to change the world. (2) My classmate Zhang Wei is a "problem student".He always go to school late and not friendly to classmate.So he has a little friends. When he head teacher Miss Wei knows this student.She visit his home and his parents.At the same time,Miss Wei know his home things.and communicate with his parents. From now on ,Miss Wei and other classmate help him for study and life,and make him do your friends.He is so exciting. Zhang Wei study very earnest hard and mark advance very quickly.He become a popular classmate in his class. (3) Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.。
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