开头就用every family,lots of housework,learn to do,help,这句话
中间就写有一次,父母去接外公外婆来家玩。接着,因为爸爸妈妈已经去接外公外婆了,【你想让外公外婆开心点,就来搞卫生}(这段可以换成你帮爸爸妈妈
做家务)最后爸爸妈妈和外公外婆回来了,看到房子这么干净,便夸你,你心里很开心(英文是:I feel very happy如果不是可以问问老师)最后用parents,be/feel,proudof ?
你几年级了??、可以捉住sweep the floor或者clean the window,总之是关于do housework(做家务)
Help around the house
I always help around the house.I help my mother with her housework.I like do housework very much.My mom always say that I do a nice work both at school and home.And she is very proud of me.I think I am good at studies as well as houseworks.Whenever I have free time,I will do housework happily.I think it is important to help around house too.Do a housework equal to exercise one hour,I think.It can makes our body stronger and makes our house more clean.The last but not the least,If we helped at house,our mothers would get more relaxed.
写好了,你也可以叫楼上的修改一下。希望被采纳喔、
My mother is very tired after works of all day.So I decided to help my mother to do some housework.First,I washed the dishes.After do that I swept the floor.then,i poor the rabbish. Did all of that,I thought my mum will be very happy.when i was thought that,mum was coming,she was very suprising for my behavior.then i wash the bowls.mum was very happy.i kown that i did very well.(。
Why should kids do some hoursework?
I think it's very important and necessary for kids to do some housework at home.
Firstly it is because they just spend too much time doing homework without having any rest. Doing housework not only help them rest but also do some body exercise. Secondly, kids should learn how hard-working their parents are and thus learn to be grateful.
For me, I can do lots of housework. For example, I can do the dishe, I can cook, I can sweep the floor, and I can also water the flowers. What's more, I can set the table and so on.
我觉得对于小孩子来说会做一些家务活是很重要而且很有必要的.首先,因为小孩子总是花太多时间在学习上,做家务活不仅给了他们休息放松的时间,而且能够同时做些身体的锻炼.其次,应该给他们实践让他们知道父母的辛苦.
至于我呢,我也会一些家务活.比如,我会洗碗,做饭,扫地,我还会浇花.还有,我也会准备饭桌等等
I like helping my parents with the housework and I can do lots of housework. In the morning I often make the bed and clean the room. When I get home afte school, I often help cook dinner. Then I wash the dishes and sweep the floor. I often wash the clothes on weekends. I think doing housework can make me happy and help me grow up.
自己的习作,希望对你有帮助
一般来说应该背一点精彩的句式放在开头用以吸引阅卷老师的注意力,
让他对你有一个比较好的第一印象,
在最后结分的时候把你的分数向上靠
(不要小看这一靠,有时候1分就是天壤之别!)
但总体基本以简单句为主,
不要显得太过于注重华丽的词藻,
当然如果你的水平足够随意使用复合句的话就没有这点条条框框,
主要是因为如果你的水平不到家,
容易出现语法或句式的错误更加令阅卷老师讨厌。
楼上的兄弟说的完全不正确!
英语的作文也是和语文一样按评分标准打分的,
不是只要语法对就好,
举一个高考评分标准为例:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次
的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
可能是你用的开头是已经用烂的那种啦,
网上找找很多很好的开头的。
开头万能公式
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
(适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion
that good manners arise from politeness and respect for
others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this,
thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can
find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures
to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures
should be taken.
书面表达 1. 做家务有益于身心健康。
有些学生从来不做家务,这不利于他们的成长。请你根据下面 的提示,以“Doing Housework is Helpful for us ”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下做家务的好处,并号召同学们在家里从事一些家务劳动。
提示:1. 做家务有利于身体健康;2. 长时间学习之后做家务可以让我们放松;3. …… 要求:1. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 2. 不少于80词。 One possible version: Doing Housework is Helpful for us Doing some housework is good for us students. Every day we are very busy doing much homework. Some of us are very lazy. Some of us think doing housework is our parents' duty. So they think they needn't do housework. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework. We can help our parents to make the bed, wash clothes, clean rooms or water flowers. Doing housework is good for our health and can relax ourselves from hard study. It can also make our parents happy and make us love labor. What's more, we'll feel proud of ourselves. So let's do some housework every day.。
With the development of science and society,culture change ang develop,become more colorhul .For example, foreign festivals turning popular in china.…………
Generation gap is a usual problem.As children grow up ,parents get older ,generation gap
come up.And as time goes by,it becomes more and more serious .…………
There is no doubt that,"Failure is the mother of success."Success is fair, everyone has a chance to succeed, and the key depends on how to seize this opportunity.…………
不知道这样可不可以。
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