总的观点是不同意(不同意应该比较好写吧)
一,开头:当代电脑很流行,因此有人提议说……(题目),对于这个观点,I find it ill-founded.
二,主体
1.让步,电脑的正面好处
2.但是博物馆和艺术馆是不可替代的 原因1:精神因素,原因2:儿童教育因素(自己编吧,任意两个合理的都可以) 这些都是电脑没办法提供的。
三,再次重申观点
其实写法很多,条理清晰既可,但能够尽可能谈到两个方面,并发掘两者内在联系是关键。
(我自己也不是写作大师,雅思作文也只考了6.5,小小意见希望对你有帮助。)
很多考生拿到大作文考题都不知道如何动笔去写开头段,有的会把题目原封不动抄下来,但如果这样做,在统计作文字数时,第一段就不被统计在内了.实际上,大作文的第一段是情景铺垫,专家建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论/解决什么问题及问题的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面: 1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon. 2)一些人的观点(some people's opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排. 3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完.因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况: 1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多.这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做: 主动语态被动语态 主谓宾主系表 某些近义词互换 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可. 2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右.这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数: 把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息.这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是开首段一定要避免出现语法错误,因为如果语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分也不会很高.。
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雅思大作文开头段模板
第一大模板法:①引题+②一方观点+另一方观点+③我方观点①引题:九大引题方法
一:①在谈到……时,人们对于这个充满争议的话题所持的观点各不相同。
①Whentalkingabout(/it comes to/it refers to) _____, people's opinions are divergent on such a controversial 有争议的 issue. 有分歧的
二:①最近经常辩论的一个问题是……
①A much debated issue these days is whether ……
①There is apublic(/general)debate(/discussion/ controversy)today(/nowadays)on(/about/ over/ as to) theproblem(/issue) of ……
三:①最近……的问题已经引起了人们广泛的争议。
①Recently theproblem(/issue)of_____
+ hasdrawn(/aroused)public(/worldwide) attention.
+ hascaused(/aroused)wide(/general/ considerable/ international) concern.
+ hasarisen(/loomed up/ cropped up)as controversial(/as noteworthy/ more distinctly for settlement).
四:①近来……的问题已经广为天下人所知。
①Recently theissue(/problem)of ……has beenin the limelight(/brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ posed among the general public).在公众的注意之下
五:①在过去的……年里,很多城市面临了……的严重问题。
①Inrecent(/ the past ……)years, manyci
写好雅思大作文开头段要素一:现象句
雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。 E.g.1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount of E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying 。
个人觉得,自己看书不如找老师点拨一下,可以省很大的力气,爱预科老师点拨专业,雅思也有很多年的经验了。
我来写个吧
In the present age, 。.. are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句写社会背景想要介绍下不好的现象也可以这样写 In the present age, the issue of。 is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether。(这个地方写要辩论的话题,改写下题目好了)has sparked much debate. Some people argue that。. while many other consider that。 Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(后者)view.
结尾:
In summary, I would concede that。m even though。, Overall, I am convinced that。 should。
很多考生拿到大作文考题都不知道如何动笔去写开头段,有的会把题目原封不动抄下来,但如果这样做,在统计作文字数时,第一段就不被统计在内了.实际上,大作文的第一段是情景铺垫,洛阳大华雅思建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论/解决什么问题及问题的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面: 1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon. 2)一些人的观点(some people's opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排. 3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完.因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况: 1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多.这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做: 主动语态被动语态 主谓宾主系表 某些近义词互换 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可. 2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右.这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数: 把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息.这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是开首段一定要避免出现语法错误,因为如果语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分也不会很高.。
这里有一些我以前考雅思时收集的小作文开头句子的模版~~~
希望对你有帮助
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