With the development of science and society,culture change ang develop,become more colorhul .For example, foreign festivals turning popular in china.…………
Generation gap is a usual problem.As children grow up ,parents get older ,generation gap
come up.And as time goes by,it becomes more and more serious .…………
There is no doubt that,"Failure is the mother of success."Success is fair, everyone has a chance to succeed, and the key depends on how to seize this opportunity.…………
不知道这样可不可以。
(一)段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。
一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是…… Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______. 4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重 的问题。 ______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。
很显然……,但是 为什么呢? According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that ______ while. Obviously, ______, but why? (二)中间段落句 1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。 On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____. 2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。
最糟糕的是……。 But I don't think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___. 3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要 的是…… ______is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First,______. What's more, _____.Most important of all,______. 4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。
首先,我们可以……。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______ 5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。
一方面……,另一方面, Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another, ______ 6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。
所有这些方法肯定会……。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______. 7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。
总的来说,……的主要原 因是由于…… Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______. 8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. 9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous. 10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______. (三)结尾句 1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that …… 2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future. 3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。
然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)……But ……and……have heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to…… 4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I'm confident 。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my classmates are very kind of me。
有些编不出来了
万能开头 一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。
这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。 文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种: 1.开门见山,揭示主题 文章一开头,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是: I Spent my last vacation happily. 下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。
例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头: The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4.概括性的开头 即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。
如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头: People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5.介绍环境式的开头 即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6.交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头: In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 万能结尾 1.活动类. Never before has xxx活动 been concerned much as it is today ! As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did something useful to improve ………… 2.好坏对比 Although every coin has its two sides, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages to cancel the long May Day holiday and shorten it into only one day. 3.父母帮助子女/老师帮助学生 As the old saying goes, “To give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; to teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime”. As far as I'm concerned, parents should help their children to adapt themselves to society rather than shelter them from what's going on outside. 4. 关注家乡,关注国家的发展 Personally, I am sure we can see that China/ my hometown is getting richer and stronger and the people in our /my hometown /country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. 5. 感恩活动的意义/ I think this is a meaningful activity, which teaches us to learn to have gratitude for the people around us. Being grateful to others is a good feeling. With it we can know how to respect our parents, the elders and teachers. With it we can learn to care for others and forgive others. Only when we are always keeping a grateful heart to others can we harvest well-being and happiness. 6.社会公益活动的意义 From my point of view, xx活动 is obviously more than just learning; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. That's why I'd like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By doing so, I feel I can make a small contribution to society. 7.学生健康 1. To improve students' health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health. 学生健康 2. As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life 8.环保类 As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did 。
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为…… Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为…… With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为…… 引出不同观点:People's views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……,然而其他人却认为…… People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to …关于……,人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
结尾 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…… Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…… Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that … 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…… There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that … 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是… Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能…… It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……。
首先提醒你,不同的文章有不同的开头的,不过呢,长点的是吧,很懒惰哦……嘻嘻,给你两端寡人珍藏万金油式的段落,我给你分开吧,你自己看着写。
开头:1 Nowadays more and more people begin to realize(be aware of ,notice) the importance(significance,seriousness)of the problem of XXX (现在越来越多的人开始意识到XXX的重要性) 2 With the rapid development of economy,great changes have taken place in…………(随着经济快速的发展,XXX发生了巨大的变化) 3 Thanks to China's reform and opening-up policy,XXX havewitnessed great economic and social progress in the past two decades飞(由于中国的改革开放政策,XXX在过去的二十年里见证了巨大的社会经济进步) 结尾:1 Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves,but also for future generations.(F不仅仅是为了我们,更是为了我们的后代,政府和普通公民应该联合起来,是这个世界变成更美好的家园。) 2 Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the moral that……(全盘考虑所有的因素,我们可以得出这样的教训……) 3 It is urgent that appropriate actions betaken to end…………(采取适当的措施去遏制……是迫切的)。
If you have received possibly have the earthquake warning, continues to maintain listens to the local broadcasting station newest report and the suggestion, like the suggestion switches off the liquid gas, the power source. Greatly but the heavy object from high will put on to take away. The jar, the glass, the chinaware and other brittle things admit in the low cabinet, the baggage shelf should have keeps off the hand by to prevent the object whereabouts. The cabinet gate should shut tightly, moves away to be hanging the object. Below prepares the goods by to prepare urgently needs: Fresh fresh water and emergency food, flashlight, fire extinguisher. Is far away these possibly to fall is pounding your thing, possibly can eradicate in outdoors trees, in the small town construction even if enough is sturdy cannot destroy, the chippings also possibly fall. Runs away spacious to place most ideal, but if does not have the enough time,stays is possibly safer in the room, on the avenue speech, the gas piping or the electric wire which bursts can increase the risk. Passes in and out the human is most dangerous, extremely easily is wounded by the building in bricks and stones. In room: When the earthquake occurs, if in the indoors, stays in inside, extinguishes the fire, is far away the glass is specially the big window (including mirror and so on). In the room quoin or has the good strut internal way is good seeking asylum place. Perhaps the low ground or the basement can provide the best survival opportunity. Hides in under the table bottom or other firm furniture, this not only can provide the protection to you, moreover also has the big breath space. When store, is far away the big cargo exhibition hall, these cargos possibly can drop down. Also is loaded with the elevator in the multilayered building in the office, in-situ hides in the desk bottom. Do not enter the elevator, the staircase also possibly can crowd the panic-stricken people. . Che Zhong: As far as possible quickly and safely stops - but stays in the vehicle may avoid hit by the whereabouts object. Crouches in hiding under the seat, if has the thing to fall on the vehicle, you will be able to obtain the protection. When vibrates stops down, the attention observation obstacle and possibly appears danger: Destroyed the electric cable, damages the path and collapses bridge. Outdoors: When outdoors lie in the ground, do not have to run. This can throw down, also possibly is embezzled by the crack. Is far away the big construction. Toward derground walk or do not enter the gallery, this can cause to be stranded. Like you already prepared to the outdoors, did not return to in the building. The earthquake causes any construction not too to be all reliable for the first time, if then again occurs slightly shakes, the building can cave in. Is safer to the summit. In the pitch earth stone is easy to fall, if crushes by the number thousand ton heavy soil block or the rock (they to have fearful speed), very little has the opportunity which fortunately survives. Rolls equally on the place like the ball changes the survival. Beach place: So long as under the cliff cannot the suitable security, but because the tsunami follows the earthquake but to come frequently, therefore after vibrates stops leaving the beach as soon as possible to the higher open field shift. The aftershock risk did not like the tsunami to be so fearful.。
一般来说应该背一点精彩的句式放在开头用以吸引阅卷老师的注意力,
让他对你有一个比较好的第一印象,
在最后结分的时候把你的分数向上靠
(不要小看这一靠,有时候1分就是天壤之别!)
但总体基本以简单句为主,
不要显得太过于注重华丽的词藻,
当然如果你的水平足够随意使用复合句的话就没有这点条条框框,
主要是因为如果你的水平不到家,
容易出现语法或句式的错误更加令阅卷老师讨厌。
楼上的兄弟说的完全不正确!
英语的作文也是和语文一样按评分标准打分的,
不是只要语法对就好,
举一个高考评分标准为例:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次
的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
可能是你用的开头是已经用烂的那种啦,
网上找找很多很好的开头的。
开头 with the development of the modern society, more and more。, some people hold that。, however, some others hold that。., in my view of point,。
.结尾 in sum, there is no denying the fact that。。only in this way can we 。
此格式最适用于写议论文了,呵呵 希望对你能有所帮助。
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
a proberb says, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显荆
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