(一) 十二岁的我开始意识到,其实每个人都很寂寞。
我想如果时间肯慢一点,也许我会把自己打理得很好。但时间仍是行如 流水,它视每一个在它身边的人都是自己的过客,无论谁向它祈求什么,时 间仍如流水般匆忙流走。
于是,像我这样慢性子的女生就开始觉得追不上时间,它走得太快了, 所以我还没能明白什么是什么时,什么就消失了。我变得很慢很蜗牛,一边 用笔记下不想忘记的东西,一边去追赶像被我落下的路程,有多少人看着风 风火火的我跑过身边,消失在了路的尽头。
(二) 开学后没多长时间,很多人都知道了一班有一个很像蜗牛的女生,短短 的头发,长的不是很好看但还算清秀,爱穿一身的校服,有一个奇怪的名字 叫做訸雪。 一个很不符合我性格的女生,尹诺。
这是我在班里认识的第一个女生,我们只是一见面就没有缘故地互相微 笑,两个人手里都握着一盒浓浓的奶茶,她的是巧克力加奶油,很香;而我 的却是蓝莓柠檬混合的奇怪味道。我晃了晃那盒蓝色奶茶,说,我喜欢复杂 的东西。
我们就成了好朋友,一只兔子和一只蜗牛。 同时,那个一个有着非同一般冰冷眼瞳的男生毫无声息地走进我的视线 ,那个,是乔烨吧。
第一次触到他的目光时,仿佛手中的奶茶已经结成了冰 一样。那双眸子,使我在十四岁有了第一次的震撼。
蜗牛的心,也开始突然 跳动加快起来。 我开始无意识地咀嚼起乔烨这个在我眼中非同寻常的一切。
(二) 军训结束之后,老班开始排座。老班看了看我,用那沾了好多年粉笔灰 的手一挥,指着一个稍后的位置说你就坐在那里吧。
我慢悠悠地走过去,看 了看我的同桌。 身材高高大大的,嘴里正哼着那首《我不做大哥好多年》,末了,又轻 蔑地瞅了我一眼。
我坐下转过头去说我叫訸雪。 等了很长时间,我的同桌停止了哼歌,说我叫梧俣……你没事少和我说 话啊! 即使你不说我也不会去招惹你!我在心里悄悄地说。
因为,我喜欢安静 啊。 尹诺则不一样,正和她的新同桌聊得火热,从上海扯到澳大利亚,真佩 服她的理解能力和联想能力啊。
把目光收回的时候,我才发现乔烨就坐在我 的前面。 我用中指轻轻触了一下乔烨的背,手指立刻充满了冰冷的感觉。
乔烨回 过头来,冰冷而安静地看着我。那么安静的表情,让我的声音颤抖起来。
你好……我叫…… 訸雪。我已经知道了。
乔烨的声音很好听,虽然有些微微的嘶哑,但却很轻很静,像是林俊杰 唱歌时声音的空灵。我迟钝地想 ……。
开头万能公式 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言) 更多经典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型: A recent statistics shows that … 结尾万能公式 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。
也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! 更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型: Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 如果说“如此禒抚操幌鬲呵叉童常阔结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? 更多句型: Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.。
万能开头 一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。
这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。 文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种: 1.开门见山,揭示主题 文章一开头,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是: I Spent my last vacation happily. 下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。
例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头: The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4.概括性的开头 即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。
如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头: People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5.介绍环境式的开头 即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6.交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头: In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 万能结尾 1.活动类. Never before has xxx活动 been concerned much as it is today ! As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did something useful to improve ………… 2.好坏对比 Although every coin has its two sides, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages to cancel the long May Day holiday and shorten it into only one day. 3.父母帮助子女/老师帮助学生 As the old saying goes, “To give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; to teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime”. As far as I'm concerned, parents should help their children to adapt themselves to society rather than shelter them from what's going on outside. 4. 关注家乡,关注国家的发展 Personally, I am sure we can see that China/ my hometown is getting richer and stronger and the people in our /my hometown /country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. 5. 感恩活动的意义/ I think this is a meaningful activity, which teaches us to learn to have gratitude for the people around us. Being grateful to others is a good feeling. With it we can know how to respect our parents, the elders and teachers. With it we can learn to care for others and forgive others. Only when we are always keeping a grateful heart to others can we harvest well-being and happiness. 6.社会公益活动的意义 From my point of view, xx活动 is obviously more than just learning; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. That's why I'd like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By doing so, I feel I can make a small contribution to society. 7.学生健康 1. To improve students' health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health. 学生健康 2. As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life 8.环保类 As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did 。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my classmates are very kind of me。
有些编不出来了
一般来说应该背一点精彩的句式放在开头用以吸引阅卷老师的注意力,
让他对你有一个比较好的第一印象,
在最后结分的时候把你的分数向上靠
(不要小看这一靠,有时候1分就是天壤之别!)
但总体基本以简单句为主,
不要显得太过于注重华丽的词藻,
当然如果你的水平足够随意使用复合句的话就没有这点条条框框,
主要是因为如果你的水平不到家,
容易出现语法或句式的错误更加令阅卷老师讨厌。
楼上的兄弟说的完全不正确!
英语的作文也是和语文一样按评分标准打分的,
不是只要语法对就好,
举一个高考评分标准为例:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次
的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
可能是你用的开头是已经用烂的那种啦,
网上找找很多很好的开头的。
开头 with the development of the modern society, more and more。, some people hold that。, however, some others hold that。., in my view of point,。
.结尾 in sum, there is no denying the fact that。。only in this way can we 。
此格式最适用于写议论文了,呵呵 希望对你能有所帮助。
一般的四六集作文都是以论文,就可以借用
Recently / Nowadays xxx becomes a very heated topic。Some hold that it is good for (students/ our country等),while others take the opposite position。Ithink that it has
its advantages and disadvantades
First,it has many advantages, such as (例如说有那些优点,或者对什么有什么好处等)。
Also, it has many disadvantages (例如说有那些缺点,或者对什么有什么坏处等)。
In a word, xx just like a double-edged sword, both have good effect and bad influence. So we have to look at it rationally, try to make good use of it and avoid it's disadvantage。
这样套写大部分都可以用,要加的东西要写的好,理由充分的话得个80%不成问题应该。 用于文章的开头 1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question:“…?” 7. More and more people have come to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention. 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.
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